Illogical Comparisons: Why You Can’t Compare Apples to Oranges

By | May 13, 2008

SAT Illogical Comparisons in Grammar: Comparing apples to orangesWow, I really suck at maintaining a blog. I thank those of you who’ve been reading regularly and letting me know that my advice is helping you prepare for your tests. You’ve motivated me to get back to blogging my SAT strategies more regularly.

On that note, today we continue with the fourth question type of the SAT Writing Error Identification questions: Illogical Comparisons.

This is a commonly missed error type that many students don’t even realize is tested on the SAT. However, once you learn this error type, it’s relatively easy to recognize and ensure you answer related problems correctly every time. So on to the learning…

Illogical comparisons errors are based on the old adage that states, “you can’t compare apples to oranges.” There’s simply faulty logic in this comparison; they’re too different to make a meaningful comparison of them. Aside from the fact that they’re both edible and that we as humans label them both as fruits, they have little else in common. An alternative, then, would be to compare apples to apples, or oranges to oranges. There are infinitely more meaningful comparisons to be made by comparing two apples or two oranges. But enough with the fruity metaphors. Let’s jump to an example:

Skateboarding in New York, (A) unlike California, (B) is usually (C) hampered by busy streets and (D) crowded sidewalks. (E) No Error.

Although it’s easy to understand what the writer of this sentence is trying to say (because we speak like this all the time in our daily conversations) there’s actually a fundamental error in this sentence. Although the point is clearly to compare skateboarding conditions in New York to those in California, what’s really being compared in this sentence is skateboarding (a sport or activity) in New York to California (merely a state).

This is what we call an illogical comparison:

Skateboarding vs. California

You can’t compare a sport to a state. It just doesn’t make sense. A more proper comparison would be the following:

Skateboarding in New York vs. Skateboarding in California


New York vs. California

Therefore, the correct answer here is (A). The sentence would be more properly rewritten as the following:

Skateboarding in New York, unlike skateboarding in California, is usually hampered by busy streets and crowded sidewalks.

So how do you make sure you don’t miss any of these error types? Well, any time you come across a problem that makes a comparison, make sure you check that it’s logically correct. It’s as simple as that. Don’t assume you know what the author means to say because it’s easy to read into her intent. Make sure that she is being precise with her words as to make the comparison logically. If the content of a SAT Writing Section question involves a comparison, 90% of the time there will be an Illogical Comparison error.

For more information on Illogical Comparison Errors on the SAT, get the Sparknotes Guide to the new SAT and PSAT.

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13 Responses to “Illogical Comparisons: Why You Can’t Compare Apples to Oranges”

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  5. Joe Says:
    July 2nd, 2009 at 12:14 am

    Actually, based on your passage, the old adage would be incorrect! Apples and oranges are both fruit, and one can rationally compare them in a sentence: “Apples taste better than oranges.”

    Nice site by the way. I wish I had stumbled upon this a year ago!

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